tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-589496012092314007.post9111679038273175866..comments2023-10-24T07:50:41.566-07:00Comments on Lindsey Sablowski: Fashion story and then all that other "stuff"Lindsey Richardsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05479405614100115901noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-589496012092314007.post-49637296651696541842010-08-07T20:36:38.657-07:002010-08-07T20:36:38.657-07:00Well, there's a bit of romance between two cha...Well, there's a bit of romance between two characters, internal struggle, all of that, so I think it's something to balance out all the run-around-fighting-action. =]<br /><br />Well, I suggest you just...let the character's tell the story for a bit, through dialogue, actions, ideals, and whatnot and kind of hold off on the massive paragraphs (I'm assuming) of narration, and say do something like:<br /><br />"I thought you were aware of the Seven Orbs once in existence by the Great Ones, Christia," he said in surprise.<br />"No," she said, greatly interested now, "I've never heard...."<br />"Well," he said happily, leaning forward in his chair to relay the story intently, "allow me to tell you...."<br /><br />And just let it flow, like that. Hehe, the above is obviously something I just made up just for you. =] Just try that and see if it works for you?<br /><br />Thanks for reading the blog. ;) Happy writing.<br />Sheron ParrisSheron Parrishttp://silveraeon.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com